cv anglais : Tournure des phrases.

**19cmos83** · 07/12/2009, 12h17

Bonjour,

j essaie de traduire mon CV en anglais, mais j ai une grande difficulte a tourner mes phrases.

Pourriez vous apporter votre correction la ou ca ne va pas ou si vous connaissez un site plus oriente dans ce genre de post, me le signaler au passage.

Merci pour votre aide.

(desole pour les accents, je suis sur un clavier Dutch)

Skills:

Operating system :
Microsoft Windows, Linux Distribution
Computer Languages :
ABAP/OBJECT, Java J2EE, .Net, Crystal Report, PL/SQL
Management system database :
Oracle9, Oracle10, MySql, Wamp*
Integrated Development Environment :
SAP LOGON, Eclipse, NetBeans, SqlServer, Visual Studio, Kylix,
Borland Builder.

Education and training :

2008-2009 : Master of Managing Informatics Projects
2008-2009 : English night school, GRETA Center
2007-2008 : BTEC Higher National Diploma : Internet Programmer training
2005-2006 : Classical and Modern Japanese University
2003-2005 : BTEC Higher National Diploma Informatics networks training (certificate taken at end of 2-year higher education course)

Employment :

08-09: Technical SAP Consultant at xxx

Development of Financial transactions : SAP ECC6

Technical analysis and development of transactional report IBLC (International Business Law Consortium) for ALSTOM Belgium NBB (National Bank Belgium)
GUI Development, ALV GRID ( Oriented Object )
Multi-Tier architecture
Development of Technical specifications

Development of Business Cases in SD MM Module: SAP ECC6

Technical analysis and development of transactions for preparation and printing
reservations. Various displays of items, stores, reports storage
UML Analysis
GUI Development, Smartforms, ALV Grid, Data Extraction[/INDENT]

08-09: Analyst Developer JAVA at xxx

Training on Java, J2EE (Struts and Hibernate)
Development of a management application in J2EE project called "Project Manager" for the department's internal development. Application built on architecture MVC1 framework Struts and Hibernate. MySQL database.
Development of a module called "online help system" to support functional users on WebSuivi applications (software monitoring perinatal), WebVax (software management situations vaccine singles), WebDoss (controls and complaints hygiene), and on WEBCERT (Management statements pregnancies), with an Oracle10 database.
Module fully customizable, scalable and independent of the application.
Realization of test's bench..
Writing:
____ Administrator manual
____ User manual
____ Trade description
Migration and Administration of Oracle9i Oracle10i database
Migration and update of the website SILOXANE in (wordpress)
Full automation system data backup of society SILOXANE

08–09: 6 mouths Project leader at xxx

Team coach of developers.
Creation of an application of folder management for the Human Resources in PHP5.
Analysis of request, conception and evolution of applicative domain.
Target specification.
Writing conditions of contract.
Application built on MVC1 (framework Symfony).
Writing and Elaboration of planning, norms and working methods.
Usage of Diagram of GANT and PERTT.
Application of Agile Methods: RAD , XP (extreme Programming).
Set up of working environment .
Set up of test's work bench.
Writing of technical documentations.

Nov. 2007: 3 Months Training period at xxx

Software development in .Net (≈150 days): Development of Framework, Management of XML's data.
Management of data' transfer on FTP, Management of languages (trilingual application), for Bausch & Lomb : Chauvin Laboratory.
Improvement software in VB.6: Application of Management of tools for the FRENCH ATOMIC ENERGY AUTHORITY Lyons.

04-05: 6 weeks Training period at xxx

Conception and finalization of a software allowing the analysis of the medium depth of roughness of a series of (de pièces mécaniques), and his Graphic presentation, developed with C ++ Builder.

Interests :

Walking, table tennis
Reading: History, Geography, Documentaire,
Trip: England, Egypt,
Teacher of C/C ++ for a group of students of TSA (Technology of the Automated Systems) at xxx.
Writing Tutoriel for BEGINNER C/C ++ on : www.xxx.fr

**Vlade** · 07/12/2009, 13h34

Skills:
Key Competencies

Operating system :
Microsoft Windows, Linux Distribution
Computer Languages :Programming:
ABAP/OBJECT, Java J2EE, .Net, Crystal Report, PL/SQL
Management system database :
Oracle9, Oracle10, Oracle 11 and previous MySql, Wamp*
Integrated Development Environment :a enlever
SAP LOGON, Eclipse, NetBeans, SqlServer, Visual Studio, Kylix,
Borland Builder.

Education and training :

* 2008-2009 : Master of Managing Informatics Projects
* 2008-2009 : English night school, GRETA Center c'est ou cette école
* 2007-2008 : BTEC Higher National Diploma : Internet Programmer training idem c'est ou
* 2005-2006 : Classical and Modern Japanese University
* 2003-2005 : BTEC Higher National Diploma Informatics networks training (certificate taken at end of 2-year higher education course)

Employment :Work Experiences

08-09: Technical SAP Consultant at xxx

Development of Financial transactions : SAP ECC6

* Technical analysis and development of a transactional report IBLC (International Business Law Consortium) for ALSTOM Belgium NBB (National Bank Belgium)
* GUI Development, ALV GRID ( Oriented Object )
* Multi-Tier architecture
* Technical specifications Development

Development of Business Cases in SD MM Module: SAP ECC6

* Technical analysis and development of transactions for preparation and printing
* reservations. Various displays of items, stores, reports storage
* UML Analysis
* GUI Development, Smartforms, ALV Grid, Data Extraction[/INDENT]

08-09: Analyst Developer JAVA at xxx

* Training on Java, J2EE (Struts and Hibernate)
* Development of a management application in J2EE project called "Project Manager" for the department's internal development. Application built on architecture MVC1 framework Struts and Hibernate. MySQL database.
* Development of a module called "online help system" to support functional users on WebSuivi applications (software monitoring perinatal), WebVax (software management situations vaccine singles), WebDoss (controls and complaints hygiene), and on WEBCERT (Management statements pregnancies), with an Oracle10 database.
* Module fully customizable, scalable and independent of the application.
* Realization of test's bench..
* Writing:
* ____ Administrator manual
* ____ User manual
* ____ Trade description
* Migration and Administration of Oracle9i Oracle10i database
* Migration and update of the website SILOXANE in (wordpress)
* Full automation system data backup of society SILOXANE

08–09: 6 mouths Project leader at xxx

* developer's Team coach.
* Creation in PHP5 of an application of folder management for the Human Resources.
* Analysis of request, conception and evolution of applicative domain.
* Target specification.
* Writing conditions of contract.
* Application built on MVC1 (framework Symfony).
* Writing and Elaboration of planning, norms and working methods.
* Usage of Diagram of GANT and PERTT.
* Application of Agile Methods: RAD , XP (extreme Programming).
* Set up of working environment .
* Set up of test's work bench.
* Writing of technical documentations.

Nov. 2007: 3 Months Training period at xxx

* Software development in .Net (≈150 days): Development of Framework, Management of XML's data.
* Management of data' transfer on FTP, Management of languages (trilingual application), for Bausch & Lomb : Chauvin Laboratory.
* Improvement software in VB.6: Application of Management of tools for the FRENCH ATOMIC ENERGY AUTHORITY Lyons.

04-05: 6 weeks Training period at xxx

* Conception and finalization of a software allowing the analysis of the medium depth of roughness of a series of (e.g; mechanical pieces) , and his Graphic presentation, developed with C ++ Builder.

Interests :Additional Information

* Walking, table tennis
* Reading: History, Geography, Documentation,
* Trip: England, Egypt,
* Teacher of C/C ++ for a group of students of TSA (Technology of the Automated Systems) at xxx.
* Writing Tutorial for BEGINNER C/C ++ on : www.xxx.fr

**19cmos83** · 07/12/2009, 14h20

Envoyé par Vlade

* 2008-2009 : English night school, GRETA Center c'est ou cette école

C est a Lyon, je vais corriger.

Merci pour cette premiere correction. Que penses tu de mes tournures de phrases concernant la description de mes experiences ...